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Ha, the cat was the best one. The gun needs to be fixed, it has white patches all over it. Although this game seems very simple, there is a lot of animation put into it. Also, I like that you put the ultimate mixture option, although you definately should have included every single option in it.
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I liked the game, but unless something was wrong on my end, there was no sound, which would really add to it. I like the donkey kong style graphics.
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I was more impressed with the format of the whole thing than with the actual shorts. The loops were pretty good, especially if pillowfighter was your first. good work!
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I may not be a fan of speakonia, or locks, or clocks, but I thought this flash was fairly well done and amusing. maybe slow down the ending, where Clocky sees the flash. Nice use of the Price is Right music!
Author's Response:
yeah, I was doing the fade out on clocky's dialogue because it was implying I passed out and missed her full comment.
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I have seen that done before, but what threw me off was that you made the alien blink. Took me a while to notice. You should uhh... work on the script a bit :P.
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I passed this based on the fact that I am a mortal kombat fan, and a fan of that song also. As such, I found it somewhat interesting. A couple things I would change for next time:
-Add some text to indicate who each character is. Perhaps animate the text to make it look like you put more of yourself into it. (I know you had to have put a lot of work into it, but some may not think so).
-I would not have included the characters with only the headshot, since it doesn't show how they've changed at all. Or at least make the headshots bigger. Those frames look too empty.
-The button moves around, I don't know if this was intentional...
I'm sure next time it will be even better. Good luck!
Author's Response:
Um I could do those ,but I dont know why you gave me such a low grade for those little mistakes but thanks for the pointers.
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I can't believe you didn't include the crash scene! Better than the last, keep workin!
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only a couple things that bothered me, like how when they were on stage, the guitar neck was between the singer and his microphone, and the lip synch was a bit off. but pretty good for a first attempt.
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my only comment is that his fingers should not be visible as he's pulling on the glittery gloves (because presumably they are INSIDE the glove).
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Caesar has it goin on! That was pretty neat and funny despite the basic graphics. Nicely done.
"I'm convinced"
teehee!
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